Evaluation Of My Pitch

I delivered a power point presenctation to my pears, trying to persuading them to be aprat of my music video preoject, so my idea would one of the project that would produeced. the genre of my music video is Hip Hop.

Content-
they liked the fact that what my aritst is singing and rapping about his dreams instead of the tipcal rap artists. they also liked that fact that my presentation was very clear and easy to understand. and they also liked my idea of having a stopry line with the music video. however teh audience felt that i needed to give more detail when explaining the story that is going to go on with in my music video. they audence also felt that the location of my music video was not clear.
Audience-
the audience thought that my choice of song was very good because it can appeal to many different kinds of music fans because it has hip hop, RnB and also some soul. i have a gfood age range because my age range is realistic to my genre of music. on the other hand i didnt link how i am going to reach out to my audience more effectively through branding.
Genre and style-
my content and topics were very relevent to youths today and what kind of problems that we face every day in our lives. good links to simlar examples with my text. how ever again this section was not detailed enough
Representations-
all my points were very clear and easy to under stand. all points were strong and ideas were good. however i didnt talk about what social class it relates to and how and why its relates to them. conforming to the social norms too much when explaining how i am going to shot and what kind of feel my music video
Narrative-
my narrative is very clear and will be sucess ful and easy to get in to and understand the video. how ever lacked some detail. did not explain enough about the way i am goin to edit my music video.